sloafer on Sat Jul 24 2004 wrote:wow Angel Chat
what a great poem i am moved!
havent read all the others yet but i will!
anyhow having felt inspired by your poem heres my attempt

lol
im sitting here smiling,and very inspired,
your words were so moving,and sincerely admired,
my mind is now racing,with adverbs and nouns,
so i'll type without thinking,but god knows how it sounds
for once i too was looking,but not for a grape,
just for somekind of freedom...a form of escape,
now its not bars that held me,and made me confined
but a complicated life,in which i was entwined,
breaking out was a pleasure,that ive recently learned,
and now i have freedom...that was truly well earned,
so i hope that you too...can find happiness,
and not in small doses, but hopefully in excess