I personally just don't get the hype that surrounds these books. I got to chapter 10 of the first book and was almost put to sleep. Just dire! Poor written and scripted, not to mention the use of words like 'down there', when referring to a woman's bits. Why not just be direct?! It's supposed to be erotic!
50 shades of yawn for me.
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Quote by flirty_4
I personally just don't get the hype that surrounds these books. I got to chapter 10 of the first book and was almost put to sleep. Just dire! *Poor written and scripted, not to mention the use of words like 'down there', when referring to a woman's bits. Why not just be direct?! It's supposed to be erotic!
50 shades of yawn for me.
*poorly.
Quote by Freckledbird
I personally just don't get the hype that surrounds these books. I got to chapter 10 of the first book and was almost put to sleep. Just dire! *Poor written and scripted, not to mention the use of words like 'down there', when referring to a woman's bits. Why not just be direct?! It's supposed to be erotic!
50 shades of yawn for me.
*poorly.
Well spotted. My tablet correcting things and me not checking it over. My bad!
Quote by Freckledbird
I personally just don't get the hype that surrounds these books. I got to chapter 10 of the first book and was almost put to sleep. Just dire! *Poor written and scripted, not to mention the use of words like 'down there', when referring to a woman's bits. Why not just be direct?! It's supposed to be erotic!
50 shades of yawn for me.
*poorly.
:jagsatwork:
Quote by GnV
I personally just don't get the hype that surrounds these books. I got to chapter 10 of the first book and was almost put to sleep. Just dire! *Poor written and scripted, not to mention the use of words like 'down there', when referring to a woman's bits. Why not just be direct?! It's supposed to be erotic!
50 shades of yawn for me.
*poorly.
:jagsatwork:
Meoooowwww! Throw me to the lions then lol!
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Quote by flirty_4
I personally just don't get the hype that surrounds these books. I got to chapter 10 of the first book and was almost put to sleep. Just dire! Poor written and scripted, not to mention the use of words like 'down there', when referring to a woman's bits. Why not just be direct?! It's supposed to be erotic!
50 shades of yawn for me.
You'll like this then flirty_4...
www.swingingheaven.co.uk/swingers-forum/viewtopic/410685.html
Quote by M1ssVery
I personally just don't get the hype that surrounds these books. I got to chapter 10 of the first book and was almost put to sleep. Just dire! Poor written and scripted, not to mention the use of words like 'down there', when referring to a woman's bits. Why not just be direct?! It's supposed to be erotic!
50 shades of yawn for me.
You'll like this then flirty_4...
www.swingingheaven.co.uk/swingers-forum/viewtopic/410685.html
This one is much better
I did laugh :-D