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I personally just don't get the hype that surrounds these books. I got to chapter 10 of the first book and was almost put to sleep. Just dire! Poor written and scripted, not to mention the use of words like 'down there', when referring to a woman's bits. Why not just be direct?! It's supposed to be erotic!
50 shades of yawn for me.
Agreed :thumbup:
Dreadful authorship. But, if it puts money in the bank, there's hope for budding illiterate writers yet...
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Agreed :thumbup:
Dreadful authorship. But, if it puts money in the bank, there's hope for budding illiterate writers yet...

Have you read them?
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Agreed :thumbup:
Dreadful authorship. But, if it puts money in the bank, there's hope for budding illiterate writers yet...

Have you read them?
Not all of them, no. But if anything like the first ten chapters of the first book, don't think I'd want to either lol
Quote by flirty_4
I personally just don't get the hype that surrounds these books. I got to chapter 10 of the first book and was almost put to sleep. Just dire! *Poor written and scripted, not to mention the use of words like 'down there', when referring to a woman's bits. Why not just be direct?! It's supposed to be erotic!
50 shades of yawn for me.

*poorly.
Quote by Freckledbird
I personally just don't get the hype that surrounds these books. I got to chapter 10 of the first book and was almost put to sleep. Just dire! *Poor written and scripted, not to mention the use of words like 'down there', when referring to a woman's bits. Why not just be direct?! It's supposed to be erotic!
50 shades of yawn for me.

*poorly.
Well spotted. My tablet correcting things and me not checking it over. My bad!
Quote by Freckledbird
I personally just don't get the hype that surrounds these books. I got to chapter 10 of the first book and was almost put to sleep. Just dire! *Poor written and scripted, not to mention the use of words like 'down there', when referring to a woman's bits. Why not just be direct?! It's supposed to be erotic!
50 shades of yawn for me.

*poorly.
:jagsatwork:
bolt
Quote by GnV
I personally just don't get the hype that surrounds these books. I got to chapter 10 of the first book and was almost put to sleep. Just dire! *Poor written and scripted, not to mention the use of words like 'down there', when referring to a woman's bits. Why not just be direct?! It's supposed to be erotic!
50 shades of yawn for me.

*poorly.
:jagsatwork:
bolt
Meoooowwww! Throw me to the lions then lol!
Always thought 50 shades of grey was a dulux paint chart lol
Quote by flirty_4
I personally just don't get the hype that surrounds these books. I got to chapter 10 of the first book and was almost put to sleep. Just dire! Poor written and scripted, not to mention the use of words like 'down there', when referring to a woman's bits. Why not just be direct?! It's supposed to be erotic!
50 shades of yawn for me.

You'll like this then flirty_4...
www.swingingheaven.co.uk/swingers-forum/viewtopic/410685.html
Quote by M1ssVery
I personally just don't get the hype that surrounds these books. I got to chapter 10 of the first book and was almost put to sleep. Just dire! Poor written and scripted, not to mention the use of words like 'down there', when referring to a woman's bits. Why not just be direct?! It's supposed to be erotic!
50 shades of yawn for me.

You'll like this then flirty_4...
www.swingingheaven.co.uk/swingers-forum/viewtopic/410685.html
This one is much better lol
I did laugh :-D