Seems ok. First line sounds a bit Frankie Howerd
Jesus is that old this year... there can't be many folk around of that age... you're not Jesus are you?
lp
I must admit Flower that I haven't checked Fun N Frolics profile for fear of a plague of frogs... or some other biblical retribution... (my own fears, not to be reflected upon the original poster).
Of course it could be purely coincidental, though would be fun to have such a celebrety amongst our number.
lp
Hi there
Your ad looks fine to me.
Although I did read this bit.......
especially looking for local females in paisley
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especially looking for local females in parsley
Well, I had been looking for what kink you were into as you had selected S&M, but I didnt think there was a fetish that involved herbs!
I am now wearing my reading glasses
Good luck with your fun search by the way
Mistress_39
it doesnt say very much, nor can i see any photos.
xfemx
thats cause u hav to be invited fem ;) lol
cheers for all the input folks
Your ad and profile is one of hundreds within easy reach of Paisley. What makes YOU stand out from the crowd? You give a little bit of information, but I doubt if its going to be enough for a girl to say “Wow I must find out more about this guyâ€
I would suggest that you put more on your profile about what sort of person you are, whether you can accommodate or will it be hers/hotels, Include your age – SOMEONE out there will be looking for your age group, so don’t be shy - when are you available ?? daytimes, evening, weekends -- lots of extra info you can add without stringing it out to an essay.
Pictures are usually the first attention grabber. A face picture is clearly going to be best, but failing that display something that gives an idea of what your general body shape etc is like. Again, whether you are a bit skinny or a bit on the plump side there is likely to be someone who fancies you – so give them a chance to be interested.
That’s the best advice I can give at the moment, so good luck to you.