How to word an add?

7 Jun 2005

being new to the site I placed my first add today smile

. I must admit I found it quite hard. I can go and talk to people in bars and clubs way easier. I guess I tried to be honest with what I wanted and what I am.
what pointers would you lot give someone new on how to post a good add?
For referance my two adds are below, a how not to?
http://photos.swingingheaven.co.uk/photo-adverts/swingers-304365.html
http://photos.swingingheaven.co.uk/photo-adverts/swingers-304367.html

7 Jun 2005

You have done it all wrong matey! Doh what a Tw@ ... you need far more misspellings than that....
... and an oversized ego is a must... say how long you can go for, and how lucky any woman would be to have you...
...a cock pic nicked from someone else is also a must... as is a use of Text-English mixed with yoof speak...
You aren't really trying are you! Tch !!!!
Now go and write it out all proper..

7 Jun 2005

Quote by postie
You have done it all wrong matey! Doh what a Tw@ ... you need far more misspellings than that....
... and an oversized ego is a must... say how long you can go for, and how lucky any woman would be to have you...
...a cock pic nicked from someone else is also a must... as is a use of Text-English mixed with yoof speak...
You aren't really trying are you! Tch !!!!
Now go and write it out all proper..

7 Jun 2005

Ignore him chaz, they're fine. Postie, bad man.

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7 Jun 2005

Quote by Edin BBW
Ignore him chaz, they're fine. Postie, bad man. :smackbottom: :smackbottom: :smackbottom: :smackbottom: :smackbottom: :smackbottom: :smackbottom: :smackbottom: :smackbottom: :smackbottom: :smackbottom: :smackbottom: :smackbottom: :smackbottom: :smackbottom:

ha thanks