New guy! Just Thought id introduce myself

29 Mar 2005

hi im Dan
im a 19 year old from manchester, im not immature or anything so please dont pass judgement! anyways ive not swung yet but really want 2 get into the whole swinging scene ive met with a couple before but nothing happend as the wife had 2 rush out im 100% genuine and really serious about this, ive had loads of replies to my add on the site but not 1 meet yet im up for it and ive not been pushy with anyone, where am i going wrong?? lol
anyways just thought id post somthing 2 introduce myself to the forums heres a link 2 my add at the moment im looking for women or couples check it out please, and letme know what you think! http://photos.swingingheaven.co.uk/photo-adverts/swingers-181398.html
thanks
dan

29 Mar 2005

Hi Dan and welcome
The writing on your ad could do with being more subtle, your choice of words is a little wrong.
Good luck anyway

29 Mar 2005

Quote by Lil_Bunny
Hi Dan and welcome
The writing on your ad could do with being more subtle, your choice of words is a little wrong.
Good luck anyway

Cheers!!
all suggestions are welcome. lol

29 Mar 2005

Quote by Lil_Bunny
Hi Dan and welcome
The writing on your ad could do with being more subtle, your choice of words is a little wrong.
Good luck anyway

I have to agree here confused

Asking for an "old woman" won't get you very far I don't think :shock: lol

Now if it had said "older woman" that kind of softens the blow a bit :lol:
Saying the couple "must be able to accomodate" is a bit harsh too IMO. Perhaps you could re word it and say you cannot accomodate but willing to share cost of room etc.
Then if you are lucky enough to find a couple who *can* accomodate, your luck is in, but without it appearing that you are not willing to meet them half way if they cannot accomodate either cool

Good luck with your ad and I hope you find what you are seeking smile

Tracy-Jayne

29 Mar 2005

Quote by RedHot
Hi Dan and welcome
The writing on your ad could do with being more subtle, your choice of words is a little wrong.
Good luck anyway

I have to agree here confused

Asking for an "old woman" won't get you very far I don't think :shock: lol

Now if it had said "older woman" that kind of softens the blow a bit :lol:
Saying the couple "must be able to accomodate" is a bit harsh too IMO. Perhaps you could re word it and say you cannot accomodate but willing to share cost of room etc.
Then if you are lucky enough to find a couple who *can* accomodate, your luck is in, but without it appearing that you are not willing to meet them half way if they cannot accomodate either cool

Good luck with your ad and I hope you find what you are seeking smile

Tracy-Jayne
i actually aggree with you there :shock: i did write the add in a bit of a rush ill try and modify it, any more suggestions?

29 Mar 2005

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
Welcome Dan .
Yeah have to agree , a slow re-type and edit of the Ad would help ALOT ! Im amazed someone so mature didnt respond to the earlier advise a bit quicker ( its really quite urgent as I can hear you being crossed off a few lists as I write )
Good Luck

29 Mar 2005

Quote by Silk and Big G
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Welcome Dan .
Yeah have to agree , a slow re-type and edit of the Ad would help ALOT ! Im amazed someone so mature didnt respond to the earlier advise a bit quicker ( its really quite urgent as I can hear you being crossed off a few lists as I write )
Good Luck

As an "older woman" but not "old", I've already crossed him off my list wink

T-J

29 Mar 2005

there i have modified it sorry if any offence was taken by the old comment :shock:

29 Mar 2005

it was the musts that got me - thought it a little offhand and not really good manners to expect things
Hopefully he'll change it soon

29 Mar 2005

Much better mate . have fun :-)