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Chapter 2 should be...

31 Aug 2003

Hi all
Had to try my hand at this story lark. It really is all true, and truly is a holiday I'll never forget!

Holiday in Greece (True story) Part 1 The "Mile High Club"

31 Aug 2003

Geoff, nice story :P ! I voted for it to be re-enacted and videoed, but you should definately tell us all what happened during the rest of the holiday. If Chapter 1 is anything to go by it was a hot one! 8)

31 Aug 2003

Geoff, it very nearly has a perfect structure to it...
A little slow in the lead in, but otherwise a nice piece of work. And a perfect 'hook' to chapter two as well!
You'll be writing for Eastenders soon, I can tell these things. wink

31 Aug 2003

Thanks for those kind comments, all of you! Chapter 2 will be along sometime soon.
Advance clue to the plot: for the re-enactment we'll need 3 guys, 2 gals and a number of "extras" (and a camera operator of course!) Volunteers will be chosen on a first come (?) first served basis.
Heather, I always like a long, slow lead up!

1 Sep 2003

Ohhh, can't wait for Chapter 2 - I'll offer to shag and be filmed for the re-enactment of Chapter 1, if someone will pay for my plane-ticket wink

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1 Sep 2003

I volunteer to hold the camera for the video re-enactment but if the the lens keeps steaming up or the pictures are a bit shaky you know why lol