Not usually one to blow my own trumpet.......

12 Aug 2004

BUT... would you all please read my story?? it's just it took me about 20 mins to write but i'm proud of it!!!!! And please would you leave HONEST comments as to what you think?? if you think its crap then tell me, i wont be offended, PROMISE!!!!!
Oh, and the spellings crap, i was trying so hard to write it quickly that it went wrong. but anyway..... hope you enjoy it, if you do please tell me and if you dont then tell me too!!!! Muchly Ta!!!!

12 Aug 2004

Excellent story, Lou, very well-written, very raunchy. And it's already been read by 2,400 readers. Write more soon.
Mike.

12 Aug 2004

Aw, thanks Mike!!! kiss

12 Aug 2004

Nioe onLou,
as I said in a recent post i too am writing some erotic fiction, done about 80,000 words so far! when its ready i'll let people have a look.
Well done again though hun, might have to nick some ideas for my book!
Mrs RSAB2 xxx

12 Aug 2004

Feel free - thanks for the positive comments!! redface

12 Aug 2004

Excellent story Lou, well done biggrin

When are you going to write another ?

13 Aug 2004

When i get the inspiration, lol!!

13 Aug 2004

in the swingers stories bit over there <-----------------------------------

13 Aug 2004

lol, its a bit over the top, but hey!! when you have access to the amount of ... um... "material" (as Daz bout his collection,lol!!) that i do... it's easy to let the ideas pop into your head!! lol