Our Ad

31 May 2004

Hi all, just wanted to pick your brains if thats ok!!
We've had a few replies to our ad, and a couple of meets with people from SH, but we were just wondering if you guys think anything would improve it!(we're not looking to have sex quickly or anything, we just wanted to know if there's anything we're doing wrong!!) We've looked at the input on Clare and Steve's thread about it, and we wanted you guys to work your magic with ours as well!!
The ad is 58611, let us know what you think, if you would change anything or not!!
Ta very much... kiss

Daz and Lou!

31 May 2004

I think the only thing that i can think of is that you need more pics,mmmmmmmmmmm biggrin

:wink: :wink: :wink: :!:

31 May 2004

You 2 have already seen our best ones, lol!! want more sent through??

31 May 2004

Quote by dazandlou
You 2 have already seen our best ones, lol!! want more sent through??

UUmmmmm,let me think about it for a minute........................
YES,YES,YES,YES,YES,YES,YES,please :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!:

31 May 2004

Looks pretty good to us, maybe a photo of Daz wouldnt go a miss!
Suppose you've just got to be patient and wait for the right peeps to come along as we're sure they will.
Oh and you could try a nurses outfit works a charm!

31 May 2004

Wouldnt mind a copy of those pics ourselves wink wink

31 May 2004

Honestly, you people are so cheeky!! lol

Will see what i can do!! wink

31 May 2004

Well, you could take out the 'no single males' bit :-)
Seriously though, the only thing I'd change is to swap the top pic with your avatar, which I think is a hotter photo. If I ever get my wife convinced to play, yours is exactly the sort of ad I'd want to reply to.

31 May 2004

We're not looking for couples, but as a female, blow job pics and dick pics turn my stomach. :scared: :scared:

1 Jun 2004

Everyone is looking for the elusive bi female ,she is so rare she must be busy giving her unicorn herd a drink from the holy grail .
So , short of surgery as a single male , all I can do is say ty for the pics , hope you find her and have magnificent sex , :twisted: and you have my sincere lust . :shock:

1 Jun 2004

Quote by Flipper
Everyone is looking for the elusive bi female ,she is so rare she must be busy giving her unicorn herd a drink from the holy grail .
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we have STAFF to do that!!!!!!!
:shock:

1 Jun 2004

Quote by deviant
i replied to your ad!
seriously i would love to know what makes an ad enticing, if i list all our likes and dislikes it seems too fussy, if we don't we get replies from people who are not 'our type'. as it is we are advertising in 'couples for couples' and most replies are from single guys! (well 3 out of 5 i think!)
deviant x
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Different things appeal to different people, so what might get a response from one couple will completely turn another couple off.
Just have a stock reply ready for those who you're not interested in. Something like "sorry but you're not what we are looking for. Good luck with your search. Regards etc etc."
Daz&Lou I agree with the comment above, remember you're trying to appeal to a couple, so maybe loose the bj shot and add one of daz (maybe topless (said in a hetro way :hunk: )). Think of it from the readers point of view, what would attract you to an ad. Chances are taking this kind of approach you're far more likely to find a couple that you are compatable with.
I'd save the more explicit shots for when you start swopping emails with a couple.

1 Jun 2004

Quote by dazandlou
You 2 have already seen our best ones, lol!! want more sent through??

Well im not one to sound eager or nowt but!.. wink

1 Jun 2004

Hi guys, thanks for all your help, will change the bj pic as soon as my puter starts working properly and stops shutting itself down everytime i get onto the pic file!!

1 Jun 2004

No! wait! i haven't saved a copy in my 'special' folder yet ;-)