We would like to improve our chances of a meet up and even though we ourselves think this is a good profile write up,What do you think? We would appreciate any feedback please!
Hi,
Now we are a couple who arnt married but like to play together and are on the look out for a dominant bi female or couple with bi wife.
Im a large built and vvwe tattood male, shaved head, goatee beard and have a dry soh. i am bi curiouse as is my swinging partner and this is initialy her fantasy of another female married or single joining us and showing the way to her voyer and bi side. Or a couple that likes to watch, be watched and join in together for really wild sex.
Though i can be dominant i am willing to submit to a dominant female as is my submissive partner who is only just sexualy liberated and still learning but willing to try everything once. Her fantasy mainly involves watching me but then she would like to join in and be told what to do by the lady who join's us.
We can not accomodate but we are willing to travel and share hotel cost if required. we are both cleen, discreet and employed.
Ally is small, very slim and fit, aged 47, short dark hair, shaved and nice firm boobs and loves toys and everything kinky. i am 45 and as mentioned earlier a large and vvwe male at 9inches long x 6inches in girth, shaved cock and balls and a repeater, stayer.
We have no hangups at all and are willing and keen to try everything and this is a first for Ally, so she may be a bit shy at first but it dosnt take her long to warm up i assure you!
We are both very down to earth and enjoy a good laff and take nothing too seriouse both in bed and out. we are both married though not to each other so we offer and expect discretion. We are open to all ideas and suggestions as we have no hangups whatsoever and wish to experiment.
We like using toys and talking during sex and i dont mean "the weather was nice to day" Ally likes at times to be treated with no respect at all and told what a slut and bad bitch she is and loves the thought of been tied as she is licked and fucked untill she has what she calls an o my god moment!!
Ally also wants to try first time dogging and also wants to be watched as we have sex as she loves to watch a man wanking n cumming. No touching her though unless she expressly invites you and it is up to her discretion.
We both work shifts and sometimes find it hard to get together but when we can we can meet day or night but prefer day meets. MORE PICTURES TO FOLLOW OF AllY & MYSELF AS WE GET THEM! (Could do with a photographer)
All replies will get a responce, even if its a no thanks! Our replies will get a mobile tel number, email and addy. If u are not a then a wink is welcome and i will check u out? THIS IS A GENUINE AD, SO NO TIMEWAISTERS.
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Some feedback on our profile writeup please and any way to i
Sex God
Ok first things first.
To much profile text I am put off before I start. So I go to the pictures and all you have is 3 cock shots
We know what these look like already. Third your photos have varying names on them? Which is kind of suspicious to me. So that is as far as I would have got with your profile before I clicked back and looked at next couple on the list.
To much profile text I am put off before I start. So I go to the pictures and all you have is 3 cock shots
We know what these look like already. Third your photos have varying names on them? Which is kind of suspicious to me. So that is as far as I would have got with your profile before I clicked back and looked at next couple on the list. 
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We would like to improve our chances of a meet up and even though we ourselves think this is a good profile write up,What do you think? We would appreciate any feedback please!
Hi,
Now we are a couple who arnt (aren't) married but like to play together (,) and are on the look out for a dominant bi female or couple with bi wife.
Im (I'm) a large built and vvwe tattood (tattooed) male, shaved head, goatee beard and have a dry soh. i (I) am bi curiouse (curious) as is my swinging partner and this is initialy (initially) her fantasy of another female married or single joining us and showing the way to her voyer (voyeuristic) and bi side. Or a couple that likes to watch, be watched and join in together for really wild sex.
Though (Although) i (I) can be dominant i (I) am willing to submit to a dominant female as is my submissive partner who is only just sexualy liberated and still learning but willing to try everything once. Her fantasy mainly involves watching me but then she would like to join in and be told what to do by the lady who join's (who's joining) us.
We can not accomodate but we are willing to travel and share hotel cost if required. we (We) are both cleen, discreet and employed.
Ally is small, very slim and fit, aged 47, short dark hair, shaved and nice firm boobs and loves toys and everything kinky. i (I) am 45 and as mentioned earlier a large and vvwe male at 9inches long x 6inches in girth, shaved cock and balls and a repeater, stayer.
We have no hangups at all and are willing and keen to try everything and this is a first for Ally, so she may be a bit shy at first but it dosnt (doesn't) take her long to warm up i (I) assure you!
We are both very down to earth and enjoy a good laff (laugh) and take nothing too seriouse (seriously) both in bed and out. we (We) are both married though (although) not to each other (also a repeat of the 1st line) so we offer and expect discretion. We are open to all ideas and suggestions as we have no hangups whatsoever and wish to experiment.
We like using toys and talking during sex and i dont (I don't) mean "the weather was nice to day" (.) Ally likes at times (,) to be treated with no respect at all and told what a slut and bad bitch she is and loves the thought of been tied as she is licked and fucked untill she has what she calls an o (Oh) my god (God) moment!!
Ally also wants to try first time dogging and also wants to be watched as we have sex as she loves to watch a man wanking n (n') cumming (cuming). No touching her though unless she expressly invites you and it is up to her discretion.
We both work shifts and sometimes find it hard to get together but when we can (,) we can meet day or night but prefer day meets.
MORE PICTURES TO FOLLOW OF AllY (ALLY) & MYSELF AS WE GET THEM! (Could do with a photographer)
All replies will get a responce (response) , even if its a (") no thanks (") ! Our replies will get (include) a mobile tel number, email and addy. If u are not a (?????) then a wink is welcome (,) and i (I) will check u out?
THIS IS A GENUINE AD, SO NO TIMEWAISTERS.
As Tweeky say's - it's a bit long winded for some.....
Sex God
I agree with those who urge you to cut the text down. When people contact you and you set up a dialogue, then it's the time to go into the precise details of what you are seeking.
Also, correct me if I'm wrong, you are both at the bi-curious stage only. Is it not jumping the gun a bit to give yourselves a user name with "bi cpl" in it?
Also, correct me if I'm wrong, you are both at the bi-curious stage only. Is it not jumping the gun a bit to give yourselves a user name with "bi cpl" in it?
One of the first things I noticed when clicking through to your profile page was that you have six photo adverts. I appreciate you might have varied interests, but it initially strikes me as a bit enthusiastic*. But that might just be me. 
* Enthusiastic is not exactly the word I was grasping for, but 'needy' or 'desperate' seems a bit harsh. ;-)
* Enthusiastic is not exactly the word I was grasping for, but 'needy' or 'desperate' seems a bit harsh. ;-)
didn't read all of your post, too much text; if profiles the same then I suggest some editing. Pics are a must unless you are a regular cammer. Chatroom and socials are the places you'll meet other members succesfully. I've been told by several members that they liked my profile...that wouldn't include the pics, however looking might give you some ideas.
