WHAT was wrong with my profile

7 Apr 2007

Well done a new profile so that is now my old profile many thanks too ppl who did reply to my post so here go'slets see wot the new one brings me lol hope fun fun fun and more not then i think it time i took up knitting lol xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Thought i would put my profile in here and ask ppl too say what they think of it has i seams too emails from the ppl i not looking to i know it a tad long but it spelling out wot it is i am looking for i did have pics too but now thanks too a few or a lot of time wasters took my profiel off and pics. !!!!LOOKING FOR A NEW PLAYMATE,NO FACE PIC NO REPLY OK !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANKS looking at my profile .I am of looking for a playmate who not too far from me and he got too B OVER 29 single and that does not mean almost married or married OR even have a g/f who not understand them lol has there seems too b a lot on here who say that so if u OVER 29 AND OVER 5FT 9 and u like too swing y not email me your FACE PIC and a bit about yourself plz and i will get back too u SORRY no tv cd not my thing guys sorry . I am just aware from the number of whispers that I have had and harrassment that myself and other women (and some men!) on here are sick of some ppl who on here who view this as a 'easy to get fucked' site rather than a swingers one and as such they don't even bother reading profiles before blowing ppl want an easy fuck then its a damn sight easier to go in town buy a few drinks and go get a room. swingin a whole different thing shame some ppl dot get it You took offence for your own reason that was meant in a tongue-in-cjeek manner anywayi am not looking for anything other then a swing buddie so those that start too get too heavy get showen the door this does not mean i sleep around or i am easy far from it if u know how long it has took some mets too take of just for a drink so if u not like that i am a single fem having fun DO NOT talk to me i not care i hope i know who is gen and who is not .

7 Apr 2007

:shock:

My advice: Looking at your profile you come across as being arrogant, your post comes across as being harsh and arrogant.
You won't meet nice people this way.. but only my advice.

7 Apr 2007

Surely - it's a joke?

7 Apr 2007

Quote by jaymar
:shock:
My advice: Looking at your profile you come across as being arrogant, your post comes across as being harsh and arrogant.
You won't meet nice people this way.. but only my advice.

Agreed, absolutely.

7 Apr 2007

Quote by Scandal
Yarksha

We're not all the same, fortunately. biggrin

7 Apr 2007

Its the lack of punctuation that scares me

7 Apr 2007

Quote by Scandal
We're all the same, unfortunately.

You sod!

7 Apr 2007

Quote by Drewxcore
It's the lack of punctuation that scares me.

Frightens the bloody life out of me!
rolleyes

7 Apr 2007

Quote by varca
I found it to be extremely aggressive and I'm sorry but very badly written. Punctuation and grammatics certainly make for easier reading. I'd start again if I were you as I don't think you will have a great deal of success otherwise.
Good luck

:D Good response!

7 Apr 2007

Quote by Freckledbird
It's the lack of punctuation that scares me.

Frightens the bloody life out of me!
rolleyes

have you been chased by commars and fullstops before too then?

7 Apr 2007

Quote by Drewxcore
Its the lack of punctuation that scares me

you scare easy biggrin

7 Apr 2007

Quote by Drewxcore
It's the lack of punctuation that scares me.

Frightens the bloody life out of me!
rolleyes

have you been chased by commars and fullstops before too then?
WTF are you on about? Have you been drinking?
Varca - my room now!

7 Apr 2007

Quote by playinglady69
Thought i would put my profile in here and ask people to say what they think of it.
I seem to receive emails from the people I'm not looking to meet. Okay, I know it's a tad long but it spells out what it is I'm looking for. I did have pics too, but now thanks to a few or a lot of time wasters took my profile and pics off.
Thanks for looking at my profile. Looking for a new playmate, please send me a face pic. I'm hoping to meet a playmate who lives not too far from me. Ideally, he'd be over 29, single (that doesn't mean "almost married" or "married" or even having a girlfriend who doesn't understand them!). There seem to be a lot of people on here who say that.
So if you're over 29 and over 5ft 9" tall and you like to swing, why not email me a bit about yourself, including a pic and I will get back to you.
Sorry, no TV/CD's, just not my thing guys. I am just aware from the number of whispers that I have had that there are some people who are on here who view this as an 'easy to get fucked' site rather than a swingers site. As such they don't even bother reading profiles before blowing in. If people want an easy fuck then its a damn sight easier to go in town buy a few drinks and go get a room.
Swinging is a whole different thing and it's a shame that some people don'tt get it. You took offence for your own reason that was meant in a tongue-in-cheek manner. Anyway, I'm not looking for anything other then a swing buddie, so those that start to get too heavy get shown the door. This does not mean I sleep around or that I'm easy. Far from it, I take my time getting to know people, even just for a drink. If you don't like that I'm a single female having fun then move along to the next profile. I hope i know who is genunie and who isn't .

Okay... I've not messed round too much with the wording but even with some simple punctuation and paragraphs it's easier on the eye!
I'd seriously reconsider some of your wording though, like everyone says... it comes over as a bit arrogant. Try less negative points and a bit more positivity and I'm sure you'll have more success. biggrin

7 Apr 2007

I have spoken to you in the yorkshire chatrooms and found you to be a really nice person, however like the other had said, I don't think it really does you justice at all....
In fact if I didn't know you, It would have scared the Bejesus out of me.....
You talk a lot about what you are after, which is fine, a little agressive but seen worse, However the one thing i did notice reading it over and over is that you said absolutely nothing about yourself in it at all....
other than the fact that you are a single fem, how do you sell yourself in the ad? where are the positives??? why would people want to meet you?
I know the numbers are in your favour but still..... give that bloke out there who does fit all of your critrea out the chance to see whether you actually meet theirs as well......
sean xxxxxxxxx

7 Apr 2007

I am a fine one to talk but the whole syle just came to me as of a 16 yr old hanging out on the streets. The text talk the agression the all comes over that way when I read it. As you will see if you read my posts In dont give a hoot about spelling and grammer but if you always write in the style above I will always envisage a cheeky kid as I read it.
Cheers

7 Apr 2007

well, playinglady, despite the grammar errors and lack of punctuation, to me you sound like you're on one, well and truly fucked off with the 'quickshag brigade' - and my answer to this is simple: it will cause offence to some but you're hanging out in the wrong place. With a name like "playinglady69", especially in the chatrooms, you are bound to get unwanted attention from those who are here thinking its a quick-shag site, your name itself will be seen as an open invitation to all & you are going to get chancers and twats pm'ing you all the time, because that's what they do!
You dont strike me as aggressive tbh , you're just trying to put across how pissed off and frustrated you are that people dont fookin read before messaging you!
My advice - shorten it, dont keep adding bits every time someone pisses you off or try to make a dig at people in your profile on the offchance they'll read it - they wont. 9 times outta 10 they dont come back for a second look. Start afresh - keep the details about age limits, your preferences and specific wants, everything else is jargon imo which can be deleted just as unwanted pm's can be wink

I very very rarely get 'hassle' in pm anymore - tbh I dont even get the pm's I'd really like lol

but that's because i'm fairly well-known, as are my thoughts - and most people wont touch me with a bargepole rotflmao

but I do get what I want from this site & lifestyle :wink:
keep your profile / ad info to a minimum, specifying exactly what you want and delete anything that arrives in your pm box that doesnt match your wants and needs, Ruthless, but effective, :thumbup:

7 Apr 2007

WHAT was wrong with my profile

everything????? IMHO
There are loads and loads of nice people on here that don't need your opinion of what a swinger should or shouldn't do and should or shouldn't be.
We like bi single fems ....... would we PM you .. NO darlin sorry.
But Good Luck finding what you are looking for
Sam xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

8 Apr 2007

One other point I would like to make .. take the bold print out as its too overwhelming. You don't need to put writing in very thick dark lettering unless you are wanting to emphasise a point.
Yes I know its not good having all the quick shag brigade writing to you, but its the price you have to pay as a lady looking for sex on any site to be honest.
Be patient as it takes a while finding a decent bloke who is all you want. But there are men out there who will fit the bill.
Best of luck and hope you have more success soon.
DD

8 Apr 2007

Quote by Darkfire
I very very rarely get 'hassle' in pm anymore - tbh I dont even get the pm's I'd really like but that's because i'm fairly well-known, as are my thoughts - and most people wont touch me with a bargepole

Ditto. Maybe I should be rotty number two! biggrin

8 Apr 2007

Quote by varca
I found it to be extremely aggressive and I'm sorry but very badly written. Punctuation and grammatics certainly make for easier reading. I'd start again if I were you as I don't think you will have a great deal of success otherwise.
Good luck

no good for a shrinking violet like you then varc ?

:rotflmao: :rotflmao:

8 Apr 2007

Quote by markz
Its the lack of punctuation that scares me

you scare easy biggrin

Only when Easy's in his serving wench gear.
bolt

Oh, the profile! Agree with all of the above, in fact I've just read the profile you have on at the moment and I think this is much worse!
Good luck though!

8 Apr 2007

Quote by Darkfire
I very very rarely get 'hassle' in pm anymore - tbh I dont even get the pm's I'd really like but that's because i'm fairly well-known, as are my thoughts - and most people wont touch me with a bargepole

Quote by Freckledbird

I very very rarely get 'hassle' in pm anymore - tbh I dont even get the pm's I'd really like :lol: but that's because i'm fairly well-known, as are my thoughts - and most people wont touch me with a bargepole :rotflmao:

Ditto. Maybe I should be rotty number two! biggrin

You two want a smackbottom

!
I've never known two more forthright and honest women ever (Yes, honesty isn't always welcome, but it is in my book)
I'd erm.....well, *ahem* redface

Anyway..... bolt

10 Apr 2007

oh I dunno.....that guinness tie does it for me !!!!

10 Apr 2007

LOOKING FOR A NEW PLAYMATE,NO FACE PIC NO REPLY OK !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ermm didnt see urs, confused

:? j

10 Apr 2007

Quote by razor_wire
LOOKING FOR A NEW PLAYMATE,NO FACE PIC NO REPLY OK !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ermm didnt see urs, :? j

When we place an ad we ask for face pics but we have none on our profile but we will send an invite to our private gallery

10 Apr 2007

Quote by Mallock2006
LOOKING FOR A NEW PLAYMATE,NO FACE PIC NO REPLY OK !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ermm didnt see urs, :? j

When we place an ad we ask for face pics but we have none on our profile but we will send an invite to our private gallery
yeh thats ok, but to be so aggressive and demanding about it, seems a little unfair xj

10 Apr 2007

Quote by razor_wire
LOOKING FOR A NEW PLAYMATE,NO FACE PIC NO REPLY OK !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ermm didnt see urs, :? j

When we place an ad we ask for face pics but we have none on our profile but we will send an invite to our private gallery
yeh thats ok, but to be so aggressive and demanding about it, seems a little unfair xj
If an advert states that I must have face pics on my profile but the advertiser doesn't have any I just move along to the next advert.

10 Apr 2007

Quote by Kiss
LOOKING FOR A NEW PLAYMATE,NO FACE PIC NO REPLY OK !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ermm didnt see urs, :? j

When we place an ad we ask for face pics but we have none on our profile but we will send an invite to our private gallery
yeh thats ok, but to be so aggressive and demanding about it, seems a little unfair xj
If an advert states that I must have face pics on my profile but the advertiser doesn't have any I just move along to the next advert.
i used to be on here as a single female for a long time, n did the same, i had face pics on so felt i was warranted in putting no face pic no reply, any messages without were just deleted xj

10 Apr 2007

Quote by Kiss
LOOKING FOR A NEW PLAYMATE,NO FACE PIC NO REPLY OK !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ermm didnt see urs, :? j

When we place an ad we ask for face pics but we have none on our profile but we will send an invite to our private gallery
yeh thats ok, but to be so aggressive and demanding about it, seems a little unfair xj
If an advert states that I must have face pics on my profile but the advertiser doesn't have any I just move along to the next advert.
We dont say must have face pics on profile ....
We ask for face pics in the reply to our ad to which they will receive an invite to our gallery..

10 Apr 2007

Quote by Mallock2006
LOOKING FOR A NEW PLAYMATE,NO FACE PIC NO REPLY OK !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ermm didnt see urs, :? j

When we place an ad we ask for face pics but we have none on our profile but we will send an invite to our private gallery
yeh thats ok, but to be so aggressive and demanding about it, seems a little unfair xj
If an advert states that I must have face pics on my profile but the advertiser doesn't have any I just move along to the next advert.
We dont say must have face pics on profile ....
We ask for face pics in the reply to our ad to which they will receive an invite to our gallery..
Who said you did say that? lol

I was talking in general. I meant people with no pics, not even hidden ones demanding pictures or no reply.