Whats wrong with us??

3 Feb 2005

Hi we would like people to take look a look at our ad 199522 and tell us whats wrong we have been on here now for a while and there seems to never be any fems or maybe a first time cple that we both like,we being too picky or ad worded wrong all help and even critiscism appreciated..thanx P&L

3 Feb 2005

Maybe a pic would help. Thats the only advice I can give to be honest. The wording is fine as far as I can see.

3 Feb 2005

The main thing is that pics always help - you have none. You have also not used any punctuation except commas thrown in more or less at random. Even if you are shaky on punctuation, it would make it easier on the eye and the brain of the reader if you to broke up the text into two or three paragraphs. Otherwise it seems fine. Good luck.
Mike.

3 Feb 2005

Well, we had over 100 replies within a week of posting our ad. The only difference we can see between the content of yours and ours is you have no photos.
THIS is ours. Have a look-see.
Good luck.
(But it really is quicker and more fun to get chatting in here and see what happens.)

3 Feb 2005

Yeah Vix is right , you should have some pics of Reese on your ad , that would do it !
(G ducks and runs for covers sniggering )

3 Feb 2005

Hi Poolies lol

There is nowt wrong with you peeps. Just take the advice and put up a pic..( a nice one though)
wink

Fred :- your very own "Hello Poolies" sayer. :lol:

3 Feb 2005

The general opinion about the picture is useful. The ad sounds like a guy pretending to be a couple.

3 Feb 2005

Quote by Silk and Big G
Yeah Vix is right , you should have some pics of Reese on your ad , that would do it !
(G ducks and runs for covers sniggering )

3 Feb 2005

Quote by duncanlondon
The general opinion about the picture is useful. The ad sounds like a guy pretending to be a couple.

agreed, or like a attached guy trying to swing without his other half knowing, drop in a pic and you should son see mails coming in

3 Feb 2005

Quote by duncanlondon
The general opinion about the picture is useful. The ad sounds like a guy pretending to be a couple.

Just re read the ad, and would have to say, yes it does sound like a guy pretending to be a cple or guy trying to swing/cheat without their partner.

3 Feb 2005

having read this advice we know what to do with ours

8 Feb 2005

I see the problem, there is no ad 199522

8 Feb 2005

well we have lots of Pics and get gazillions of mail mainly from shireen wanting to meet us pmsl.......... no seriously we get far to many mails from single guys and not enough from cpls .... is it me who's Butt ugly or Deb ?
:shock: rolleyes

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8 Feb 2005

Quote by steve_n_debbie
well we have lots of Pics and get gazillions of mail mainly from shireen wanting to meet us pmsl.......... no seriously we get far to many mails from single guys and not enough from cpls .... is it me who's Butt ugly or Deb ?
:shock:
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:x You blummin fibber Steve..... smackbottom

Yeah it's you that's butt ugly... now the lovely Debs.... mmmmmmmmm :twisted:
Shireen
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8 Feb 2005

Quote by steve_n_debbie
well we have lots of Pics and get gazillions of mail mainly from shireen wanting to meet us pmsl.......... no seriously we get far to many mails from single guys and not enough from cpls .... is it me who's Butt ugly or Deb ?
:shock:
its you steve not debs
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